Wednesday 13 April 2016

The dragon slayer

WALT: plan and write a descriptive piece of writing.

Success criteria (for plan):
  • brainstormed words you could use.
  • Know what your story is going to be about
  • Organise my ideas into what could be written as paragraphs.
  • Ordered my ideas so that the paragraphs make sense.


Task 1: plan a descriptive piece of writing to explain the character of Tarragon.

Looks: Blue beady eyes, Spike shoulder blade, big chin, big muscle, pointy nose, helmet like a viking, tiny legs

Personality: tough, nice, brave, no fear, Big heart, strong, take advice from horse, give dragons ride on horse,

Job: 19 kill, giving up his job for a dragon, jingles money after a kill,


5 synonyms for these words
  1. Brave= heroic, unafraid, death-or-glory, bold, daredevil
  2. Strong= ripped, tough, powerful, muscular, well built
  3. Kind= nice, friendly, helpful, encouraging, caring
  4. Caring= kind-hearted, warm-hearted, soft-hearted, tender, feeling
  5. Mean= beast,  mean person,  nasty, horrible, rats

As strong as king kong
Strong like a horse's kick
as tough as wwe fighter
tough like a gorilla
as kind as your family
as mean as the dragon slayer

job
looks
Personality

In a time when dragons threatened mankind, there was only one man who fought against them all.  His name is Tarragon. He and his brave battle horse Black Bull, roamed the desert in search of these terrifying monsters. But things don't always turn out as they should...

Tarragon is a dragon slayer the best dragon slayer around. He works as hard as he can. He kills for the money. He doesn't care if the dragon has babies to take care of. He is ruthless and will stop for nothing.


He has a sharp pointy nose with blue beady eyes he has a shoulder armor with giant spikes. He has a helmet like a viking he has a big chin. He has such big muscle and so tiny legs.


He is the toughest knight but deep down he has such a big heart and he has no fear and is brave. He take advice from his horse. He is strong.

1 comment:

  1. I'm not sure he really has a big heart when I read your second paragraph James. He sounds scary.

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